There was a boy called will
who climbed up a hill up on the hill he saw one more hill
Oh no a crow
as it flow it was a pro
as it showed
Hi I am a bad guy and also a spy
sometimes i will cry why i don’t know
I will glow
in the show
and. I am the best spy bye.
Hi will,
I really liked your poems
You also had good grammar in your writing
You just could have spaced it out a bit more
And included less writing in the first one
But other than that you did awesome
Good job!